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So I'm reading through this comic for the first time, and I got a couple of things I wanna say

First off, I really dig the art style, I can tell a lot of attention to detail was put into this, so GG. That being said, most of the comic feels uneventful, like its mostly just dialogue with the occaisonal "weird" to break it up. I would recommend adding more exciting scenarios or more clever dialogue

Theres potential here, and I wanna see it get the attention this deserves!

posted by kcspice on October 3rd, 2016, 4:41 pm





 
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@kcspice: Thank you so much for your comment!
I admit that I do worry that my style of storytelling is a bit slow and thus may feel boring at times. However, at the same time I want to make sure that all future events are set up properly, since this story is still very much in the beginning. It's a bit difficult to find the right pace, so I will definitely take note of your feedback and keep it in mind. :)

posted by Jurinova on October 4th, 2016, 10:35 am



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